Wednesday, February 1, 2012

More on Seanan McGuire's latest

I want to add something to my kinda critique of "One Salt Sea".

McGuire includes little things that add to the story telling. Such as there is a fea who is half human and half octopi like the sea witch in "The Little Mermaid". McGuire has the MC describe how this person moves in a dry building. A short scene within a scene but still neat. I need to remember about those types of little things.

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I'm working on turning lead into Gold