Showing posts with label westerns. Show all posts
Showing posts with label westerns. Show all posts

Saturday, July 13, 2019

Two Western tales from me. July 13




#saturdayscene July 13  

Last week I didn’t post a SaturdayScene for I was busy again with the new house. But this week I can do one. This one is a bit different for it has two short Western stories. One is part of a story set I will be Indie publishing whenever I can get the cover done. Set titled Deputy Marshal Gray Dobson. I finally found one that isn’t bad even not quite what I wanted. But I have spent hours on it and decided to take this one. Anyway, I will also be doing a second Western set once I find them all. I thought I had a file with they all in it but so fat nothing. So Here are two Western tales. One with Marshall Dobson showing he uses his brains not just his sixgun. The other is the first Western I wrote many years ago. Revised half a dozen times as I learned more about how to write. 

       Deputy Marshall Dobson finds a Burnt out building.



      Gray Dobson looked the burnt building over. Small tendrils of smoke still drifted toward from two placed. It sat by itself a number of yards from the end of the town. From what he could see of the unburnt wood, no one had painted it which meant some of it looked while a good percentage had a blacken charcoal color.
        He liked the angle better from higher than ground level, so he stayed on his horse to study it. His legs though were tired from the long ride to this town.
       It looked like the building had two storefronts. This half of the roof of this section had collapsed. The air still had a strong scent of burning wood, so he wouldn’t be surprised if something still smoldered in there. 
        A wagon rolled by behind him. He heard the horse hoofs, and wheels turn. The townspeople would be up by now with their daily routines. Someone walked on the wooden walkway. That would make it twenty feet away from the burnt building in front of him.
     Another breath and he almost coughed, ash still drifted in the air. Water would be good. 
     After the drink from his canteen, he looked at the building again. The town’s people had done a good job in saving the part in the back that was a different store. He figured that some of them must have had some training. At least a couple of lectures. This section would have to be completely rebuilt though, possibly the whole thing, but he thought they could save the rear store. The rest of the town hadn’t been touched by the fire since this building sat so far away from the others. 
      Dobson looked to his left. The main part of Freshwell consisted of eleven stores on one side of the street with ten on the other. Each block appeared to be one long building but he could make out newer wood on the end store. They must have added to this one to the original construction when the population grew. Now they had two general stores, one much smaller than the other. It could be new, he thought. A fairly large saloon took up space in the middle of one side. He could make out three other buildings that sat by themselves not connected to either side. From their spacing the town planners might have wanted a street there to go east eventually.
     The blacksmith had been built far down the road in the other direction. He could still see it and hear the pounding of the blacksmith, smell the hot metal when he rode by it. But this building may have been the border of the town in this end. 
      Gray looked down at the dirt. One bad thing was that the town’s people had cluttered up the dirt of the street with their wagons, horses and feet: covering and marking out any tracks left by those who had done this. But it couldn’t be helped, the fire had to have been put out. He rode around the building and studied the dirt back of it then came back around from the opposite end.  
      The building didn’t look like a smithy or a saloon, which left a store of some type, a church or even a school house. The town looked large enough for one. He had ridden through Freshwell three times the last year but knew nothing about it even though he had met with the Sheriff as a common curtasy. He was a Marshal passing though his area after all. They had a nice size jail, larger than he thought they needed, but he may make use of it this trip.
      He looked around again. The Inn was actually larger than the saloon. It had rooms on a second story and a kitchen plus storage, he assumed, in the back, and four rooms on the street level. They were bigger and more expensive or so he had been told when he stopped for lunch one of those three times. 
     As he recalled from when he rode by, there had been nothing in this building to start a fire except for a wood burning stove. He didn’t recall ever seeing the pipe that exhausted it sticking out of the roof. Now, however, one lay bent, twisted and black with soot, on top of a pile of smoldering wood. Part of the pipe looked darker than another part. In fact this whole section of the building looked in worse shape than the other sections.
     He shook his head and wondered if someone had really started the blaze. With that thought, he looked closer. Why would anyone burn this building especially if it had been a school? Than again maybe he was just buying trouble. He shrugged, that was his job. He wouldn’t be a US Marshal if he didn’t like trouble: creating and finishing it for those who started it. Now though he he hadn’t smelled any kerosene or alcohol when he rode around the building. 
     Fires could be caused by accidents, acts of carelessness, or drunks, as well as on purpose. However it started this one was a shame especially with the loose of books and supplies inside, if this was a school. It could take months to get new supplies and the cost for shipping them out here would make it much harder to get them. 
      He swung his horse around and headed for the Sheriff’s office. This fire pricked his curiosity. 
      It didn’t take him long to pass the other end of the block and to approach the jail. It sat by itself about ten feet from the end of the walkway, which supported his idea of this being a street corner. He looked round him to see if anyone carried a gun near him. The three people he saw with any weapon of any type, looked like upstanding citizens which probably meant that the town was fairly safe, but he would stay on his toes. All it took was one person who didn’t like US Marshals, or was drunk. 
     The street had its share of road apples, some of which smelled and looked fresh, which meant it about average horses here. It looked like Freshwell needed someone to clean the street once a day though. He shrugged that really wasn’t his concern though. Once he got to the jail he tied his horse to the railing and stepped up to the wood sidewalk it also had. 
     He glanced in the other direction and noticed that the larger general store rested at this end of the line of stores. That could be to help farmers and ranchers with wagons load better.   
    Dobson nodded to the  two men who stood outside of the Sheriff's. They didn’t look like trouble, just as if they waited for someone. He opened the door and closed it fast for a wind followed him in. Inside, he saw a wide room with two desks each with a new looking, comfortable, padded chair behind it and two half way comfortable chairs on the other side. A portrait hung on the wall of the President of the United States and one of an older lady. She was dressed in a very nice, blue dress. A local person he thought. Maybe she had been a rich widow who had paid for the building of the office. 
    Two doorways led to the back. He thought he could see bars through one doorway. The other might lead to the outhouse and/or to a kitchen near by. Or to another cell for certain types  of prisoners. 
    The sheriff, Tony, a tall skinny, older, weather beaten fellow with shoulder length brown hair, stood talking to a nicely dressed man. The man smelled of cigar smoke, an expensive brand the Marshal thought. He must have paid a pretty penny to have some shipped here. He knew from experience not to get too close to the man when he blew smoke out, it could be strong enough to taste.
    The Sheriff said, “We will catch the person who set the fire.”
     The man said, “Why would anyone set fire to a school house?”
    “I don’t know maybe they didn’t like that their children have to go—we have a couple of those type people in this town—or maybe they had an argument about what should be taught. Could even that they got the wrong end of that building and it was meant for that new bookstore.  It’s hard to see the burr under a man’s blanket at times. But I want to speak to the new teacher and see what she has to say. Miss Sanderson has been upset over certain details and ”
     The man said, “I know that there are citizens that disagree with store just to sell books half of which would be penny dreadfuls, I am not all that excited about it myself but to burn it? That is crazy.”
    The Marshal thought, good I was right. 
    Sheriff Tony said, “Some people are that crazy. Isn’t that right Marshal?”
      The two turned to him and even as his eyes widen. He thought he would had wait until they were done with their business, but this opened the door.
     The Sheriff said, “This is Marshall Dobson. He has been in these parts for a few years. Marshall this is John Whitmore.”
     Dobson nodded to John and said, “Yes, there are crazy people out there. I wouldn’t have as much of a job if there weren’t. I was sent here to go after a train robber. However, sometimes it isn’t a person that causes the problem. It is also my job to make sure we know the difference.”
     Whitmore raised his eyebrows and the Sheriff looked puzzled and a touch irritated. 
    “I looked at the remains of the school. I believe it was just an accident.”
    “What?” The sheriff said.
    The man said, “We looked it over ourselves.”
   “I thought you had. But was it before sunrise?” 
    “Just after the sun started up.”
   “After a night of fighting the fire?”
   Whitmore nodded. He still had bits of ash on his pants, so he may have really helped.
     The Sheriff said, “Where are you going with this?”
    “I saw that part of the chimney for the stove looked blocked. I think that is where the fire started.”
     The man spoke before the Sheriff could even he open his mouth, “Someone could have blocked that on purpose hoping that would happen.”
    Dobson nodded, “Yes, someone could have, but by the looks I still go with my theory that some animal, or other built a nest in there. I know of a few times when that has happened. It has been warm the last few months and the weather just started to turn. I suspect that it was just carelessness. No one thought to inspect the stovepipe.” 
     The man nodded with a thoughtful look on his face. The Sheriff didn’t look convinced though.
    “I can explain what took my thoughts down that road. The stovepipe has a deeper burn in one section about halfway. You might even find some cooked little ones; rats or squirrels in the pipe.”
    The Sheriff and the man had a disgusted look on their faces but the other Lawman said, “Come to think of it I thought I smelled meat cooking. Maybe you are right after all.”
     They went outside to the burned building and the Marshal showed them where  he thought the fire started and the pipe. They both looked convinced when he finished.
     The man said, “I believe you’re right. You are one smart Marshal. No wonder you have a good repetition in these parts.”
    “Thank you. As I said it is my job to figure out when it was a person and when it wasn’t and to protect people that are innocent.”
     Whitmore said, “That is a good way to see your job, Marshall.”
    Sheriff Tony said, “I’m glad we will not be bothering someone who is innocent. And I will declare that every business inspect their stovepipes to make sure that doesn’t happen again.”
     Dobson nodded and after some more talking he said, “I will take my leave now. I need to get a room for the night so I can get an early start to go after one who is bad.” He thought, even if the rooms are costly it should be worth it for one night.
    They each nodded and shook his hand and he left. He got his horse and on the way to the town’s corral past the blacksmith shop he gave himself a small smile. It felt good to think through something like that and to know that an innocent person would not be questioned for something they did not do. 
  
The end
              

Now for Not All Good Deeds Are Punished.




     Bill strode over to his horse, with long, quick steps. He looked in his late thirties, and wore a light yellow long sleeved shirt and gray trousers. No gun weighed down his hip, he didn’t need one here-most days. 
    He stopped near the railing in front of the town’s hardware store, his eyes narrowed. Voices from a commotion had attracted his attention. It looked just like the same situation as in the last town he had lived in. He breathed in, snorted. The air was filled with, dust, road apples, spilt grain and the flowers that grew near each store front. A cold beer would be good right now to wash the dust out of his mouth, and the horse dropping smell out of his nose. A quick glance showed him the town, he liked Wardsville. However it looked like he may have to move on. 
     With a sigh, Bill pulled a rifle out of its holster, which rested on the side of his horse, and turned. He hoped he wouldn’t get into trouble again, but he knew it wouldn’t stop him. He cocked the weapon while still in the turn.   
     After two long steps with the rifle aimed from his hip, he said, “Back off.”
     A young man, dressed in an undershirt and denim pants, with his hands on a woman, looked up. That man’s brown hair was very short and his eyes were bloodshot. Even though her yellow dress looked very proper he still pawed her like he thought she wore a low cut barmaid’s outfit. Bill knew her husband was out of town for a couple of months. 
     Everyone froze for a moment. He felt a breeze on his face and could smell the man from here. He must smell like a wagon load of broken whisky bottles to her. 
     The young man said, “You must not know who I am.”
     The first man rolled his eyes, “That is my comment. I’ve been here a week, but obviously you don’t know who I am. I don’t care who you are. I know what you are. A snake in the grass. Now act like a gentleman, a true man, and get your hands off of her. Her husband won’t be back for another month and he won’t be happy if you mess with his wife.”
     “I am a man, you horse droppings, more than you.”
     “Not the way you are acting now. You’re acting like a spoiled snake. Now remove your hands!”
      He pressed his finger on the trigger. The other man let go of the woman.
     Bill said, “Now miss, give him what he deserves-slap him.”
     She looked surprised, but at the same time like she wanted to carry out the order. The younger man looked shocked. When the woman moved he stepped back from her-out of arm’s length.
      The brown haired man looked at the man with the rifle again, swallowed and said, “Hey, I didn’t mean anything. Just being friendly. I just thought she might be missing her man.”
     The man with the gun cocked his head to the side, for the other man mumbled and slurred his words. It took him a second to figure out what he had said.
     Bill said, “She probably is, but she sure ain’t missing you, now leave!”
     The drunk glared at Bill, but after a moment walked away. Bill watched him until he went around a building. Three moments later he came back out on a horse. After another glare at Bill, he rode away. 
     The woman half-ran to the man with the gun, but stopped a few feet away.
     “Thank you... I don’t know you but I’ve seen you around the past week but Dan, my husband, will want to shake your hand and have you over for dinner when he gets back.”
     Bill tipped his hat and said, “I am called Bill-no, not Wild, that’s another Bill. I could always use a home cooked meal, fresh cornbread is mighty tasty, but I didn’t do this for thanks.”
     The store owner came up, wiped his hands on the white apron he wore. Bill tensed and waited for an angry tone like the last time he chased a rich man’s son away from a woman. The man, however, reached out his hand.
     “I want to shake your hand, Bill and add my thanks. She’s a good costumer and a good citizen of the town. Toby shouldn’t have done that to her.”
     He paused for a moment than said, “If you need anything come on in to my store, I will give you half off for the next couple of days. We don’t want that type of thing happening in our town, or to be known for being a town afraid of wealthy citizens.”
     Other townspeople came by to say how much they appreciated his actions. Even Jim, the sheriff came by, probably when he saw the citizens hanging around. It turned out he had been getting a shave during the incident.
     After his explanation he said, “Thanks, Bill for taking care of young Toby. He isn’t usually that bad. If I had seen he was drunk earlier, I would have put him in a cell to sleep it off. He’s dad will deal with him. He doesn’t like his sons behaving that way in public. He may make him apologize to Mrs.  Tanner.”
     Bill felt his mouth drop and his eyes go wide surprise, but he said, “Is that all?”
     The expression on the sheriffs face changed to businesslike; oh oh, here it comes, thought Bill.
     Jim said, “Yeah, there is one more thing. I could use a deputy, this town is growing like a weed. I’ve watched you around town. I saw how you act around other people and after today I believe you would make a good deputy. I think I can convince the town council to spring for the pay for one. Probably only half of what I get, but your bullets will be free. On top of that if the townspeople like you they might just give you a free meal, or a cut rate on hardware, just don’t expect it all the time.”
      Bill nodded, even as awe filled his heart. He stood there
to let his heart adjust to what he had just heard, then with an effort he nodded, smiled, and said, “Yeah, that sounds good.”
      They shook hands and the sheriff said, “Good, I’ll make the rounds and talk to everyone. Come by tomorrow morning and I will give you a badge.”
      Bill nodded again still in a good shock. As the sheriff walked away Bill felt the breeze again, smelled the street-even the fresh road apples didn’t smell so bad-and smiled. He thought, yeah, this is a good town.
                         The end


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Saturday, May 14, 2016

New story serial Western part one

May 14 2016

Time for War Wound an action packed Western tale filled with suspense, by me. L. E. Doggett. :)

I originally wrote this one three or four years ago. I have revised it since at least once so I was thinking it wouldn't need that much work. Well, even though it had better writing than the last two stories I posted, it did need a bunch of work. I redid the opening, working for depth, I redid certain scenes adding things to clarify what was happening and so it would make more sense. More of what my hero would do. I also added a couple of animal sightings, more of the five human senses too. Could use a couple more of both though. So in all even though I deleted a few sentences and phrases I added a total of 500 word. And that was just in the first half. 

Over all I think it is one of my better stories with plot and writing but only you readers can say for sure.

I had planned on making this part 2,000 and a couple hundred words but it kept growing, now it is 3,020 words. 

Anyway enjoy:

War Wound

The rider sat on his horse as he surveyed the flat land around him. Nothing but sage, grass and cows. The warm, dry air didn’t bother John Adler even though he kept his hat on to block the sun. He liked to watch the cattle for he enjoyed the quiet out here away from people. Not much to smell out here either, except horse and cow droppings and the sage. Scents from a fire and dinner of rabbit and bread would come later. 
As his habit John and his horse rested still as a snake, waiting for its prey to come into striking range. John Adler had developed the skill, while serving in the Great War. It had come in handy while he carried out special missions behind the Southern lines. John brushed one hand over his blue dungarees, and thought on how his pants and red plaid shirt made him stand out. He shook his head, reminding himself for the thousandth time, that he didn't have to worry about that anymore.
He didn't like to think of the War, but at the same time he was glad he was able to use some of the skills he had developed during that troubled time. 
He slowly moved his head scanning the area. There was nothing, but flat land for miles; without buildings, trees, hills, or even sand dunes to break the flatness. Off to one side was small smudge on the horizon that was a mountain range. 
His horse moved its head up and down, a second later it flipped its tail chasing away some flies.
He straighten his hat, which was a dull light gray, a little darker than the color of his horse. The hat, unlike his clothes, had seen better days. 
On one side of him, far enough away to look one-third their true size, a batch of cows which were grazing. They were part of a larger herd that were located out here in the middle of nowhere.  
John had been hired by the owner to check out the land. It was more a favor John was doing for a friend, even though he was being paid good money. It was the type of job he liked to do these days. Ever since he had resigned his commission just before the war ended, he liked being out in the middle of nowhere. It was peaceful and there was nothing here that would remind him of the war. Much of the fighting he had been involved had been in either mountains and hills, or wooded areas. It was refreshing, for his memories had a disturbing habit of coming to the forefront of his mind when he saw a ravine, or a certain type of hill side. Here they stayed where they should be, in the back of his mind. 
He shook his head, for even these thoughts were enough to remind him of why he had resigned. He had seen too many good men 
die and had killed too many men. Some of the ones he had seen killed came to mind. He had known most personally. There had that kid blown apart by a cannon shot, he hadn't known. He just happened to be looking in the boy's direction when the ball hit him. 
John shook his head again and tired to shake the thoughts by scanning the area again. As he looked in one direction he noticed a very slight movement headed his way. It was very tiny and looked like it was right where the sky met the ground. He sat up and put one hand above his eyes to see if he could get a better look at it. From here it could be anything from a lone rider to a cattle stampede. But as he learned during the war never assume anything. Even here it could be bad.  
As the smudge grew, he began to suspect what it was. He kept his eyes darting back to it, even as he scanned his surroundings to make sure nothing else was headed his way. A minute later his suspicions were confirmed. It was a party of men riding his way, hard. Looked like seven, even though he couldn't be positive. They were too far away for him to be able to tell if he knew them, or not. A few seconds later he was able to see that they rode like an army unit. Either they were the Calvary, or they had served together and rode that way out of habit.
He mentally prepared himself for trouble, even though he didn't know yet if they were friends, a group working for his friend, people just passing though, or if they meant trouble. He thought, by their looks, it would be the last. He had developed that knack on his missions. It had kept him alive more times than he could shake a stick at. 
As they neared him, they continued to ride hard and suddenly one raised an object to his face. It was a long metallic and pointed his way. He heard a slight noise and saw a small puff of dust explode a few yards in front of him. This was immediately followed by two more reports and two more puffs of dust a bit closer as two other riders raised rifles to their face. 
Before the second bullet hit the ground, he had spun his horse around after he decided it was time to leave. They were definitely not friendly-whoever they were. He didn't know why they were shooting at him, but he thought it would not be a good idea to wait around to ask. He knew he would stand no chance against them.
The way they were riding, he would be in their range about the same time he would be able to get his rifle out of its holster. Seven against one was not good odds even if he was a good shot, and he was not the best shot with a rifle. He would hit some but they would get him in the end.
John urged his horse to its full speed, heading for what he thought would be a more strategic ground to make a stand. 
They rode across the plain for half an hour like that. The wind drove past him, just like on many of his missions. Sweat dripped from his horse’s mane. Sweat dripped down his own underarms.  
One lone rider in the lead galloping, just out of rifle shot range, with seven riders chasing him. With quick looks behind him, he still didn’t recognize any of them but the dust that the horses hoofs raised made it hard to make out their faces.  
It didn’t take long for him to increase his lead. His horse was in good shape and it had been rested, while theirs had been ridden hard already. After ten minutes, he judged that he could slow his horse down a bit and still stay in front of them. He didn't want to over tax his horse, it was a good animal. And he may need it later if they acted this determined.
John wanted a drink of water to wash the dust out of his mouth, but had no time for one. He wasn’t that far ahead of them, but he knew how to ignore the needs of his body for a while. He kept an eye on them to make sure they didn't gain on him, nor give up. It would have looked funny for him to be galloping across the plain, like a bat out of hell, without anyone chasing him. Of course he would prefer that to this.
Finally John entered the foothills of the mountains he had seen in the distance. He started up, slowing his horse as he did. They would have to slow also when they reached the hills. The mountains would provide places to hide, as well as obstacles that would make their rifles useless. That was the plan anyway. He knew from experience that plans very rarely worked out the way they were designed to, but they were good to start with. 
As they climbed higher, he slowed his horse even more. He could now smell pine and the dirt his horse’s hoofs tore up. The shade from the trees and large rock made helped to cool him and the horse.
At the first, he had had his horse climb as fast as possible, trying to outdistance them to allow him to lose them. But now it was too steep with too many things to catch a horse’s leg. Two deer took off fast to the right, angling away from his path.
The chasers didn't give him an opportunity to lose them though. He remembered some of the words his team mates used at times like this. These guys were good for they chased him through the foothills and onto the mountain proper. They climbed higher and higher, no matter how far ahead John was, or how long it took, they were not about to give up. Or so it looked to him. 
Forty minutes after entering the mountain, John rounded a very large rock and suddenly entered a camp. There was two fires going, both almost bunt down to goals. The larger fire had a tripod with a large pot hanging from it. There was a rough hewn 
table set up for eating near the fire, along with a smaller table. Four tents had been pitched close to the rear of the camp. Beans cooked from the smell, his stomach rumbled for it had been hours since he had eaten. The burnt wood odors should have warned him earlier. Maybe he was losing it.
It took him a second to look the camp over—he hadn’t lost that ability. Five men sat in the camp. Each wearing thick denim blue pants and thick, dirty gray shirts. All five reacted instantly to his appearance. They stopped what they were doing and faced him, one moved over to where a rifle was laying on the smaller table.
He just nodded neighborly at them and slowed down, trying to act like he was just passing though. Which he was doing.
As he rode passed them his back felt prickly. He knew they were watching him as he rode on. He made sure he rode slow with no nervous twitches to make them think he wasn’t interested in them and their mine. He went around one of the thicker tree therefore out of their sight. A slow, full count to one hundred and he increased his horse's speed a little. When he thought the horse had had a rest he increased its speed again. Out of the camp he could smell his own odors and knew he passed close to where they had dug a latrine. 
A few minutes later John thought he was far enough ahead of the group of men, to be able to find a place to use as a strategic position to shoot it out with them. He could eat some of the bread he had while he waited. He had eaten cold beans, bread, apples while he had waited for the enemy many times too. He sighed, it seemed like he could never escape those thoughts and habits.
That was why he still wanted to lose them eventually, instead of killing them. He had seen too much dying, and had done too much killing to want to do more.
A few seconds after these thoughts he spun his horse around when a shot sounded. Seconds later it was followed by seven, or more real fast. Some were on top of others. 
They had all come from the miners' camp. He cursed as he realized that it was almost the time he estimated that his chasers would have made it to them. He hadn't expected them to shot the miners. There was no reason to, they were after him, not them. He expected them to be more professional then that. Unless of course they were just mad dog killers, who killed because they enjoyed it. There were men on both sides who had to be put down for that reason. But if so why go after him. It made no sense. 
Damn, he needed to make sure. John decided to back track to the camp and see who shot who. It was possible that the miners had overacted after seeing armed men after they had seen him ride through their mining camp. Maybe they fired first. He doubted it but that way he wouldn’t be so responsible for their deaths. 
With three curses he hadn’t used since the War, he left the trail. Even though it had been a long time, the knowledge of how to cover up his tracks came to the forefront of his mind. Once he had left signs that he had gone on and made sure no one would be able to tell he had covered his tracks he headed back to the camp. He rode parallel to the trail keeping himself far enough away so anyone on the trail would not see him. That meant he could not see them either, but he would have to live with that.
When he neared the camp he left his horse just out of eyesight of the camp. Again using skills he had learned long ago he moved closer to the camp. He moved over to where he thought the latrine was. The smell would cover his own and less chance of running into someone. No one was about though, and he finally 
entered the camp itself. The stink of blood was obvious, it mostly over came the burnt beans odor too. He scanned the woods carefully and when he was sure no one was around, he went over to the bodies. All five miners were dead, but so was one of his chasers. Good. As he examined the area, he found evidence that another chaser had been wounded. From the drops of blood, he couldn't be sure how bad, but it didn't look serious.
When he was done examining the ground, he took one more look around. One last look at the bodies he sadly shook his head, and he disappeared back into the trees. He walked back to his horse normally, forgoing the catlike movements he had used, for there was no need. The chasers had gone on, he must have missed them on the way back down. They would soon figure out that he had tricked them and be looking for him.
Mounting his horse John decided that he would have to do something about the men chasing him, after all. Bile came up. He had hoped he could just loose them, but now, after this act that was no longer an option. Of course he probably would have had to deal with them anyway. He had been just hoping against hope, that he would not have to kill again. He would do what needed doing.
He didn't like leaving the bodies like that, but he didn't have a choice right now. As he rode off, he hoped that they didn't have any families that would wonder what had happened to them.
Just before he went in-between two trees, he turn quickly when a twig snapped back at the camp. Had he missed one of the chaser? The wounded one maybe. But why hadn’t he taken advantage of when John had examined the ground. 
Now he thought he saw someone back by the camp and decided it was time to hurry. He spurred his horse to a medium speed, heading the direction he thought his chasers would go. 
A few seconds later he heard a slight metallic noise behind him. He turned in the saddle to look behind him. As he did he saw someone standing near the camp. No, two people. They looked as if they were dressed as the miners had been. John turned his horse slightly and angled away from the camp making sure there were trees between him and the camp. 
On the way to find those who were chasing him John not only kept his eyes open, but his ears also. During the war he had learned that sometimes you would hear something before you saw it. Even a small noise could give away someone trying to sneak up on you. And animals would run. He had seen a few squirrels-the miners might have been eating them-and one deer along the way but they could be bear here too. 
A few minutes later he heard another slight sound behind him, he again angled away from his current course. He urged his horse to increase its speed and aimed it in between to larger trees that were fairly close to each other. The distance between the trees was narrow, barely wide enough to allow his horse fit in between them. Once he was through the trees he made a quick turn to the right followed by a quicker one to the left. He curved around another tree, this one was over two feet wide. 
He heard a small explosion behind him and out of the corner of one eye he saw a tiny spray of bark as something impacted on the tree next to him. He spurred his horse on, going back and forth. He went around one four foot wide tree, went straight for a while then around another almost as big. Once on the other side of that one he rode up a short hill, once at the top he looked down.
He saw three men on horseback who were tying to sneak though the trees while at the same time looking for something. He figured the something was him. He saw one of them glance his way. 
John glanced down at his clothes. He cursed—silently--again. He had forgotten he was wearing a red plaid shirt. That wasn't good at all, he must be standing out like a Yankee among Johnny Rebs.
More gun shots.

end part one

Sunday, October 30, 2011

PS One More time

Oh yes. One other reason I have done more work lately is that I haven't played around for almost two weeks. Niice. Thanks be to God. That almost always takes up my writing time and gets me no where.



Gotten in some good writing on New Mage today. Now I'm moving toward the end.... finally. I'm going to have to rewrite chapters two and three though. I have said the first three chapters but I have already redone One.  Revisions on it all of course but that's not the same.

I finished two of my small short westerns including that one I want to send to those three-four markets but I still have to revise them. Right now I won't do that sequel to the western I wrote a couple of years ago so I can do that one I mentioned last note. The one that is different for me.

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Another mini update

Didn't have a story to work on at work so I started mini western. I wanted to do a couple so that is okay. But like most of the others it might be a bit long for a mini. The last two stories I did were 700 and 800 words long.

Not sure where the story I'm doing is going even though I have an idea or two but be kind a fun seeing. I may come up with an idea for a second.  Maybe I'll see how I do and end up writing a bunch of shorter westerns. But we shall see.

I do have one western story and so maybe a few shortees will work well with it in a E-book. As I said we shall see.