This is part two and final section, of War Wound, my post Civil war action packed Western.
Even if that is a redundant sentence. :)
Comments are welcome.
I ended up adding over 1,000 words to my original tale. That was after I cut a few sentences and phrases. I added more in descriptions, action and the five human senses to draw people deeper into the various scenes. It's very hard to do that with just one or two senses, even though there are a couple of authors who can. But for most of us we need the whole batch of human senses. Even with that I believe I would have done more of that if I had rewritten this by scratch.
I added a bit from last week to help reorient the reader to what is happening in this week's section.